Mike turned his notes around lightning fast. He gave a great note. If I didn’t love a written scene then cut it back to action. Good note. I made a pass doing just that and dropped the page count to around 130. I also acted on Whitley’s notes as I made the pass and night one is solid.
Gonna read in the morning and send his way. From the way he’s talking Sci-Fi’s getting antsy. Of course, they’re expecting a 5 to 10 page outline. They are getting diamonds and gold dipped in chocolate.
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